you saw light in a different color
ours was dim, simple, transparent
yours was bright, deep in your eyes, telling
your gaze had a story,
your smile opened the coldest of hearts
your strength was terrifying
yet you were gentle
you made world a better place
for the ones you loved
yet you strayed onto a forbidden path
your light shone on the outside
you were a mess within
left alone to fight
called upon when needed
your light was brighter
then it turned into night
What a perfect way to start a story, there’s so much potential! Great work, once again!
very lyrical